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LASERED

The light 
               fades
               silver
birches 
reflect
               the
               setting
sun
a
winter’s
                day
ebbs
away
                     still
                    tranquil
the
image
                   lasts
                    and
       
lasts
does not
die
                 lies
                lasered
on
my
                       mind’s
retina
in my
                  memory’s
eye




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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:23:00 PM

    It is an honor any time you speak and post here on the soup.. God Bless...pd

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:22:00 PM

    Brian,, making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing this form. I never seen it before. I enjoyed the vision one can not take from you. I will look up the Imagism form. ~xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 12:58:00 PM

    I can visualize this alongside your artwork....a birch in the winter sunlight. Sheer loveliness is all it is! I must not the year end without a wish for a Happy and healthier New Year for you and Kathy!! Best Wishes in 2013 Brian! May only good health, and good things come your way! God Bless! Love, Carrie