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Understepping Poem Three

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Understepping Poem Three

Sometimes my life makes no sense at all.
Will I escape from my confusion?
Do you Wonder what is wrong with me?
I sometimes wonder if I'll escape.
When the voices come I run and hide.
Is this who I am destined to be?
Just a man who has become crazy.

See Understepping One and Two for 
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  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:57:00 PM

    From your creative mind comes the discovery of another new form! This is really exciting. I love Questionkus...which is challenging...I've written some but not confident enough to post them, yet. Thank you for sharing your craft with us, Richard. A very happy New Year to you and yours! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:29:00 PM

    I hear the voices and Just a man who has become crazy?...Interesting work..Sara

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/27/2012 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just playing around, no voices in my head to keep me company ha ha. Thanks for visiting.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:58:00 AM

    I love this!!!!!!! You need to try and make this form official if you haven't tried already!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/27/2012 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just submitted today, I will let you know if it is accepted. I think it offers lots of creative possibilities.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Amazing...nice share Richard <3<3<3

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/27/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sukmawati.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Hummm.. Challenging, i will try this :D

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/27/2012 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm done :D check mine :D
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 9:16:00 AM

    Very deep and honest. Enjoyed very much Richard. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/27/2012 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Gail
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 8:35:00 AM

    love it... nice

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/27/2012 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jacob