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Blanket of Stardust

Like millions of eyes they shine, 
Smiling sparkling laugh lines;

Huddled together so tight,
a plain old day but a lovely night;

Glittery chortles in the breeze
warm you before you can freeze;

Blanket of stardust holds your gaze,
Just as bright as the Suns rays

Nothing is quite as it seems,
Starry eyes heat your dreams


Melani Udaeta

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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:33:00 PM

    I like the million of eyes... a warm feeling you share with us... thank you for sharing this blanket of beauty with us here on the soup... xox~pd

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:03:00 PM

    Very beautiful Melani, I really enjoyed your verse, xxx