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Layers

As you peel back one layer you will a bit more of me
Each layer defines parts that the naked eye may not see
The outer layer is tough resistant and seems weather proof
Just one more layer down is where you start to find the truth.

Peel off a third one and that’s where my feelings are hidden
Not on the surface to be played with or abused when bidden
Another layer down is where my tears are caught and held back.
Until the hurt of death and squalor, that layer attack

The last layer you may peel from me, I hold on to so tight
 I don’t want you to see my heart naked, in the harsh light.
The layer that covers my heart and keeps it safe from abuse
Life constantly picks at it and it’s not really much use.

I tried so hard to keep that one in place and safe from harm
Then life produces its peeler, which I would like to disarm.
It endlessly peels away at the layers of my protection
Leaving me vulnerable and weak and open to infection.

To fight back at life I have found a small good cure all
And that is what lets me walk on the edge, I totter but not fall.
In times of trouble and death, pain, anger and even love
Look for the silver lining that helps give this life a little shove.

Shove these things aside; they will get dealt with in a while
Knowing that whatever it is, will be behind us - so smile.
The layer that keeps our minds strong and yes even clear
Needs the most attention, it gives us hope, love, and even fear

Good things and bad things all come and go day by day
But we find we always look back on them and so we can say
Another day passed though we never forget the pain
Let me replace that layer now and cover my heart again

A smile helps to build up the layers and keeps me on life’s path
As does love, friendship and forgiveness, and a smile turns back wrath.
When we feel we can never smile ever again in a thousand lifetimes
We will look back and find the memory dims and the sun returns to shine

My layers are there I try to build them and keep them supple and strong
But sometimes they get ripped in a wrench and I think I am wrong
Straight to the point where my heart beats and is exposed to life’s ills
Time to pay the piper, as he comes to collect on life’s bills.

Laughter the best medicine and that I truly believe
But there’s a time to laugh and then there is a time to grieve
Time to think and to fight, love and to perhaps even pray
I hope my layers will keep intact, and get me through another tough day.

© ~GG~ 25/12/2012

My son had to work today, he is a supervisor on a motorway service station. He came home to us at the end of his shift for any comfort we could give him because of a motor accident just past where he works that took the lives of two children and an adult and seriously injured two more. He had to get access for the emergency services and then deal with angry motorists as he had to block them trying to re-enter the motorway, while things were dealt with.  His one thought was how the families would now cope, not only with the losses but that fact that it would taint their Christmas celebrations for the rest of their lives.
Although we do not celebrate Christmas he is so concerned for their feelings he is finding it difficult to cope with. My heart grieves not only for them and their horrendous ordeal, but my son whose heart has been laid open to their pain.

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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Very touching poem, it speaks in volumes on many different levels. I love this one for the message behind it. I pray for all the families involved, including your son. Good Write.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Thomas Hardy writes in The Mayor of Casterbridge thus; "happiness is but an occasional episode in the general drama of pain"... Like the line "Laughter the best medicine"... Wonderful Mandy... Thanks for stopping by my poems. Angel

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Mandy, my heart goes out to your son and those poor families. And to have to deal with angry motorists on top of it all. GEEEZ. This poem has an awesome message for us. Luv, Andrea

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    Thanks Andy Love xx
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 11:16:00 AM
    I understand.....may today your trail be filled with even small smiles! (see, it works!)I jimbo

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    Date: 12/26/2012 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jimbo , it does xx
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 6:49:00 AM
    So good, Mandy. I do think that God can peel away our layers and replace them with His protective covering. You will see. Love ya, Toquyen

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    Hugs to you Torquyen xx
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 6:31:00 AM
    What what a beautiful poem. I love the description of the shielding layers and how they can be renewed with a smile and a joyful heart. To every time there is a season. I hope yours will be filled with plenty of smiles.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 5:45:00 AM
    - Thank you for year 2012, many good poems and nice comments from you, Mandy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 12/26/2012 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ans thank you Anne Lise love all the best xx
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 3:52:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Always look out for your output and another worthy subject. Incredible how you keep churning them out.

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    Thanks Robert my friend xx
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 1:19:00 AM
    i think Rose says it all, Mandy an incredible heartfelt poem.. by one incredible lady...

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    xx
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 11:36:00 PM
    Hello Mandy, a really great write here my friend and sorry to read about your sons day. But the fact he thought of others is a testament to who he is. Rollo

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    Date: 12/26/2012 1:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you Rollo, that means a lot xx
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:59:00 PM
    This piece has really touched me Mandy, when we love, the scars run deep, but love is brave and it does what only love can do, stand by you, so glad I stopped in to read before bed, this gives me nutrient, you are one amazing woman, mother and friend, and I rely often on your strength, your son if very fortunate to have you, xxxx more whence it came from.

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    Bless you Rose xx