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Astray

Day by day.
Another look at the gray.
Slowly drifting astray.
Watch as I decay.
Shall we replay?

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  1. Date: 12/25/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Nice one!Short but meaningful! :) Hopefully we'll see it turn into a full poem! :)

    Earp Avatar Jason Earp Date: 12/26/2012 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is a reply to both of you. Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was good or not, but I have a few others that I may post. They're mainly short and sad. haha
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 2:39:00 AM

    Welcome, let me be the first to comment on your work...... Very promising.... I will read more as you post. Talent is evident. Nice initial poem.....Write on!! ... Jake