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Tasting Bliss for contest

         

Tenderly held close
Secrets floating past my ear
Lips gently nibbling
at my mouth sending shock waves
down my spine tongue tasting bliss



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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Seren, this is gorgeous! I love the second line especially. Congrats on an awesome win!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:07:00 AM

    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Seren love xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/9/2013 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy ....Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:11:00 PM

    congrats for your win. and I disagree with what you told Debs down below here. You fit in with EVERYbody here perfectly!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea, I do have a go lol......Seren
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:31:00 PM

    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 6:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow thats strong words Debbie, nooo I am jut a jobbing poet, not like the ones on here that can write fantastic things..... Seren
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:11:00 PM

    seren, I know this one placed in my contest, I just can't remember which placement. Anyway, I am seeing it by finding winners under titles of the poems here at Soup. Congratulations. This one was especially sensual!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Youngave it 7th place Andrea according to my list in members area. Thank you very much....Seren
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 5:30:00 PM

    Very passionate entry into contest..Winner for sure in my opinion..Sara

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:26:00 PM

    Seren, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Could feel it too!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol. ....Seren
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 7:42:00 AM

    naughty but I think very nice, watch out Santa ............

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me write something naughty, no way....lol ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 8:19:00 PM

    Hi Seren, this is a really great write, lots of amour. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 7:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rollo. Have a great holiday....Seren