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Demolished

I’ve never hit rock bottom so hard.
I got up but it feels like I’m still sitting down.
I’ve never felt pain so bad
To the point where I just can’t function.
The memories I can’t seem to erase
They replay in my head constantly until I’m in tears.
I’ve never had my heart broken so bad
That just picking up the pieces crumbles in my hands.
I’ve never felt so alone.
That even while you hold me
I can’t feel your arms.
I’ve never been so depressed in my life
That even a psychiatrist don’t know my diagnosis.
There is only one way to go but up.
But my ladder keeps sliding down.
I run, jump, skip, hop.
Defeat lays on my breastplate.  


12/23/12

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:42:00 PM
    you run,jump,skip and hop,now let me tell you a secret,PRAY,it works better,great write Wilindean,welcome to the Soup and have a Merry Christmas

    Inniss Avatar Wilindean Inniss
    Date: 12/23/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you must have read the one where i prayed!