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WHAT A DAY

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WHAT A DAY

                         Strange wind's blowin' as dust fills my eyes,
                         Turning and walking to an unknown way'
                         Pressing my sore eyes and then re-open them,
                         Oh!what a day!

                          
                         Wide circles of my cherished experience breaks,
                         My trusted allies and enemies vanish,
                         Mysterious voices announce to the world,
                         What a day!

                         
                         I see the hidden side of the moon,
                         The dying man's eyes transfers to mine,
                         The molecule splits and the crow croaks,
                         Oh!what a day!

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 1:38:00 AM

    Beautiful write Ceciliah! I love the way you've described the various scenes building up to the last scene of the dying man - effective. And your use of refrain serves to enhance the theme very well. Well delivered poem! Well penned!