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About This Poem

Smog

Smog squats
On tender red eyes

It sits blindly
On asthmatic lungs
Its acid droplets
Linger on



Parody of "Fog" by Carl Sanburg

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  1. Shah Avatar
    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/24/2012 2:26:00 AM
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    Something many of us can relate well with. nice poem penned.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/24/2012 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Yesha. Happy Holidays! Wishing you and your family the very best.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/23/2012 10:30:00 AM
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    Yes, I kind of recall the poem this is based on. My husband has asthma so bad and I can really relate to this poem.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have asthma too. It doesn't bother me now. Just Take inhalers . I used to have to take pills as well.
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 12/23/2012 8:05:00 AM
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    Do you remember how cars were giving out exhaust not too long ago? How we breathe back then! Now we can really see things are getting for the better :) Enjoyed, Jon.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/23/2012 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Toquyen. I have asthma but not having trouble with it right now.