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  1. Date: 12/7/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Few words, but yet deep expression. Good poem, Jon. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/8/2013 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. This is my parody of Carl Sandburg's poem "Fog"
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 2:26:00 AM
    Something many of us can relate well with. nice poem penned.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/24/2012 4:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Yesha. Happy Holidays! Wishing you and your family the very best.
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:30:00 AM
    Yes, I kind of recall the poem this is based on. My husband has asthma so bad and I can really relate to this poem.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/23/2012 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have asthma too. It doesn't bother me now. Just Take inhalers . I used to have to take pills as well.
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Do you remember how cars were giving out exhaust not too long ago? How we breathe back then! Now we can really see things are getting for the better :) Enjoyed, Jon.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/23/2012 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Toquyen. I have asthma but not having trouble with it right now.