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drunk

Heineken
crystal head vodka 
MD 20/20 
im pretty tipsy 
I'm pretty drunk
I'm happy 
I'm sad
I'm happy 
Watchin Xmas movies.
This is the worst poem ever. 
but then again I'm pretty drunk

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Your honesty is so good that its bubblely - I'll have a High Life for both of us - although you are adept at being mischevious Jay, the way you 'keep it real' is very respectable - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 4:10:00 PM
    worth a read Jay,,,have a wonderful New Year.

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 12/27/2012 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol well im glad you think my mess of a drunken write was worth the read (:
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:51:00 AM
    And now you have a pounding headace too :) at least thats how i feel next morning, when i have had a few, enjoyed, Happy Christmas to you love Elizabeth

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 12/27/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh I did haha. I had work the next morning and no hangover and my two friends couldn't even pull themselves out of bed haha
    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/24/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well i hope you got the last laugh, when your friends arrived home in the early hours feeling the worse for wear, with worse headaces than you :)
    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 12/23/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha I forgot the Gin and juice I had too...i had a smallll headache but it went away relatively easy...i enjoy a beer just about every night and occasionally I get drunk, but yeah I had a pretty good time. Till my friends went to the strip club and left me by myself that's when I got sad. I don't like drinking alone lol