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Haiku Hell

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Haiku Hell

Haikus with beer go well, I was told So I sat down and I ate eighty-four And when I got through I’m here to tell you, There sure was a mess on the floor Written by John Posey 12/22/12

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Oh that's is gross...but awesome.....:-) :-)

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 3:47:00 AM

    That's disgusting..very clever..Thanks for your comments on my Nonets..you should try one. I actually write mine backwards from 1-9 syllable count (almost like an etheree) then flip it. Works for me...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:25:00 PM

    ha..love it...pd

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 12/25/2012 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD, those things really tore me up... See my reply to Andrea's comment below.... Jake
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Must be like shelling peanuts at five Guys, where they hand you a bunch of peanuts while you await your burgers and fries. Love this one relating with haikus!!

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 12/25/2012 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I don't think so, sweetheart. I believe it was a malady brought on by some gastric instability. I lost a great pair of shoes in the process and they had to burn my clothes. .and they only reopened last week... and I've been banned for life.. Thanks for the comment.... Jake
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Funny one!

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 12/22/2012 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, This one even brought a chuckle as I wrote it.... Jake
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 8:22:00 AM

    I do believe it!

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 12/22/2012 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nothin' worse than a rotten haiku.... Jake