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Standing Alone






a flock of white geese
almost touching the rainbow
on their busy wings
takes a little bit of me
and fades in the horizon



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    Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 10:24:00 AM
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    Just beautiful! I sense a great deal of freedom and awe in this picture as the geese come into your view... then so soon fly away.
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    Betty Bolden
    Date: 2/20/2013 7:11:00 AM
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    wonderful write
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/21/2013 11:54:00 PM
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    Just saying hi again!! I am getting SO behind on my comments. Grrrrr.
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 1/20/2013 9:03:00 AM
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    beautiful imagery and contrast here, kash-- shucks, sad to say, my answer to your question is also enn oh :(
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/16/2013 2:12:00 PM
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    Just here to say HELLO, my friend!
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:05:00 AM
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    Ahh....so beautiful and serene, and rather sad as well. Loved it. Many thanks once again, Kash.........I reviewed Deb's theme, you gave me a chance to try again. Thank you as always! :)
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    jack horne
    Date: 1/2/2013 1:20:00 PM
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    love this tanka, Kash : )
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/31/2012 2:33:00 PM
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    hey Kash, didn't I see one above the poem for my contest the other day? Did you remove it? or am I imagining something that didn't happen? well, I bet it's around New year day for you already. FIREWORKS for you!!!
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 12/27/2012 9:20:00 PM
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    what a beauty.I joined the journey!Happy new year to you and yours my good friend.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/27/2012 8:06:00 PM
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    waiting and waiting for a new one. You are enjoying your December a little too much!!!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/27/2012 6:33:00 AM
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    a breathtaking sight Kash in this lovely write.. my hubby has me on half hour limits since my ordeal at hospital..so happy to read u again and thankxx for your luv .. wishing u a blessed NY ..
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    harry horsman
    Date: 12/26/2012 3:05:00 PM
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    this is amazing Kash...
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    Sean Goodwin
    Date: 12/26/2012 1:00:00 PM
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    Lovely image you have painted. Such an awesome tanka. -- Sean
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/25/2012 5:52:00 AM
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    Wishing a Merry Christmas to you and yours Kash!
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    Ravindra K Kapoor
    Date: 12/24/2012 10:10:00 PM
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    You have created almost a beautiful painting on the canvas of sky. Great write my friend and congrats for your grand win and thank you for your comments on my latest poem. Season’s greetings and Best Wishes Kash…Ravindra K
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/24/2012 11:04:00 AM
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    Excellent and wonder filled scene that you have painted...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..May the joys of the season be may for you and your family this year..Sara
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/24/2012 5:32:00 AM
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    Good morning, Kash,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/23/2012 1:53:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 12/23/2012 10:32:00 AM
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    Hi Kash great tanka my friend, have a great christmas and new year, all the best Owen
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/23/2012 6:42:00 AM
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    Good poem, Kash !! A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug. - MERRY CHRISTMAS - //Anne-Lise :)
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    Sukmawati Komala
    Date: 12/22/2012 7:55:00 PM
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    awesome,,,, this is a real lovely Poem..thank you dear Kash ...enjoyed so very much....<3<3<3
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/22/2012 5:32:00 PM
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    dang, I would have liked to see this one further up the list. It is so good, kashinath. How are you , my sweet friend? are you busy or being lazy?? well, congrats on the winners' list.
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 12/22/2012 3:26:00 PM
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    Sheer beauty, Kashi...unimaginable beauty. If I am sitting on a park bench in front of the pond, I too can see them touching the very same rainbow! Congrats friend...Gwendolen
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    olusegun Arowolo
    Date: 12/22/2012 2:18:00 PM
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    Nice piece,Kash...Wonderful images and beautiful view...Congrats on your win......
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
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    Well done Kash! Have a great Christmas.
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 12/22/2012 11:47:00 AM
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    Sigh... Sometimes beautiful things we see just disappear. Love the picture, Kash. Enjoyed.
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 12/22/2012 9:05:00 AM
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    Nice work!
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/22/2012 1:16:00 AM
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    very beautiful imagery in this lovely soft tanka. loved the read, well done!!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/21/2012 9:23:00 PM
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    Kash, stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/21/2012 5:18:00 PM
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    SIGH!!! up to the sky. Thanks for posting this gem, Kash.
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