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DayDreamer

"The Dream Manipulator"

Wishing upon the stars I see.
Magical moments and sugary surrenders.
Embrace the twinkle notes. 
My lids slip into an everlasting feel~  In trance, my dreams belong to me... 

Candle wax spills so sweet.
Bejeweled with bloodshot posies.
Aroma occupies the scenery.
A tune seductive and real~ In trance, I walk into my dream…

In the country of warm fairy lights.
I glisten and listen to the echoes. 
Overheated, love and hate alike.
Fog leaks under the new sky~ In trance, I’m far from reality... 

I captivate all the calmness.
My gender followed by those.
Giving life to an ordinary page.
Faint away to your beating pulse~ In trance, I’m obsessed by my dream...

Savoring the precious forecast.
The furnace keeps me warm.
Motions moving from this curse.
Sun-dance, away from the rain~ In trance, I yelp in my dream...

Suave lids reeling in the glow.
A soft memory fades the feelings of yesterday.
The day swings in a new journey.
Today “DESIRE” is my choice of food~ In trance, I stay in my dream...


by;PD 

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Good morning my dearest sis! Stopping by to say Hi & send morning hugs. Thank u so much for your text messages last night. I woke up early this morning 'cuz I'll encode exercises/worksheets & at the same time peek here :)). The signal is better now. I'll prepare for schl after an hour. Have a wonderful day/time there! lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 10:21:00 AM

    dreamy and rich with imagery. Beautiful

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:59:00 AM

    I love your poem you use alot of vivid language.your poetry soup friend BROOKE FLOYD

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Hi Linda, Dreams, those little pieces of life that come and go like wisps of smoke. Many are the times we wish to leave behind this reality, for me, because it just bears down on my soul., dreaming could be a way of keeping my sanity. I do Love the images you painted on my mind with your skilled pen. May your dreams be filled with light and spread that light with your words painting the images of life for your readers. Catch you later. Your friend, MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:12:00 AM

    we wish in the stars sparkling beautiful piece

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:59:00 PM

    I am entranced by this dreamy poem! Loved it!... Sometimes, there is nothing I would rather do, but daydream. And, sometimes, daydreaming is all I can do!...Great poem, Linda!....You might like my poem, "Sanctum"...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, once again. It is very much appreciated!

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:02:00 AM

    Beautifully woven Linda.Big hugs to you.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:57:00 AM

    soupmail

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:43:00 AM

    Very nice poem.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 1:34:00 AM

    I thnk even man who r beauty impaired, cnot resist 2 c beauty in ur work!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:26:00 AM

    no doubt this is a 7 dreams are so important and I believe help to keep us sane. a flawless write Linda

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Outstanding deep write... Thanks for sharing ~A.O

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:39:00 PM

    I live a great deal of my life in this state lol, so I can relate whole heartedly to this beautifully written poem. I'm still catchig up on your back pages, seems you're up to date on mine now, thank you very much, feel honoured. For you Dark One, I'll give you the nod on any new postings. Thank you once again and do take care. Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 2:47:00 PM

    Linda,I must say you are so deep in thoughts. Don't stop!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Yes, i said dinner my dearest sis. I just came back home. I decided to dine out and here, let's eat together! I wish you're joining me here too! ;))). How I wish someday (may my dreams come true) I could have breakfast or dinner together with my #1 idol and loving sis and friend! Enjoy your breakfast too my dearest sis! Sending you again my biggest sweetest smiles and morning loving embraces! take care and have a great day in sunshine! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Thanks for taking time to comment on my poetry. Enjoyed your poem. I have Not seen a poem of yourz on Karen O'leary's sit- please post one P. to the D. - http://whispersinthewind333.blogspot.com/

    Parise Avatar Rick Parise Date: 2/22/2013 3:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    type-o///sit to site http://whispersinthewind333.blogspot.com/
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:48:00 AM

    hey, PD. it's so late and difficult to catch up here lately but just wanted to tell you hi and to say, wow, you are sure going gung ho with contests. Always a delight. You go, GIRL (btw, any word on Linda?? I feel a little worried about her.)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:46:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:56:00 AM

    deep and mesmerizing,...Hi Linda , saw your new avatar...catchy ;-)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/31/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and thanks always for your kind visits and support on my page...
  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:52:00 AM

    Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 7:58:00 PM

    You're so clever, this internalization dramatic yet beautiful. It always seems more dramatic in the moment, with hopes of achieving past greatnest in some aspect. I think I know the feeling. Wonderful poem that I need to read again.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 5:27:00 PM

    Thank you for your thoughtful words! Always a blessing to hear from you! JP

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Love this, Linda. Thanks for reading my poem and the kind comment. I thank God that we can dream. That in itself is a way of surviviing. In a better time and place we will not need to dream, dear. Exceptional write. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Fantastic imagery! :)

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 8:57:00 AM

    Congratulations for being one of Poetry Soups best poets. When I read this poem about "daydreaming" I can so relate to it as sometimes I don't want to wake up from a wonderful dream. There is so much bad things happening in the world. It is nice to be able to escape into our dreams and shut out these things for a while anyway. I will read more. I'm sure. Love Pam.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:50:00 PM

    Daydreamer is my Poetry Handle when I share on Facebook.. Hubby often says 'you daydreaming again?' Lol very beautiful :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:13:00 AM

    Excellent write!

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 7:51:00 AM

    Excellent and superb write my friend PD..hand salute for being one of the great poet here on PS. I really appreciate and grateful for all your help and support to my poems, for your nice comments. Thank you so much!!You are one of my inspirations...about your baby contest..I already wrote 2 stanzas while going to work(inside the bus) last week..I will finish it next week (^_^) Have blessed day always. Hugs/Love, Maria

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 6:47:00 AM

    YES desire Ive always been filled with like your opattern it again remibnds me of your pink skys poem taking of dreams and dreaming Im working on poem at moment called r,e,m,s YOU DO INSPIER ME XXX DAVIDSCOTT HOPE YOU ARE WELL

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 12:08:00 PM

    Great write. I can relate to this. sometimes, when I dream I wish I didn't have to wake up. Many good dreams and many blessings. Lucy

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