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HEART

H arrowing muscle! forcing passion on my soul.
E ver-present beating - a metronome of feeling. 
A rduous yet wonderful, fickle yet insistent.
R acing with adrenaline - Swinging, jumping, screaming! -
T ill it stops... and all is silent and unfeeling.


For Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" contest
Placed: 4th

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Heather, you caught me...I'm Canadian...haha. No, not really. Great beat to this acrostic!...which is fitting since it's about your heart. Never stop beating!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:08:00 AM

    Wow, this one really makes an impression on me! Awesome the way you wrote it, with all the contrast and feeling put into the poem itself.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Great acrostic..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:30:00 PM

    very nicely done Heather, and awesome win ;} Happy New Year ;}

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Good morning, Heather,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:51:00 AM

    Wow this is brilliant, it has so much heart! congrats on win:)

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 2:02:00 PM

    keep ticking,you have a lot of great to offer to the world,wonderful write Heather and have a HAPPY HOLIDAY

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Heather, hope it's still ticking love xx

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 5:25:00 PM

    I sure remember this HEART FELT poem!!! BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 2:58:00 PM

    Full of energy and movement, this acrostic rocks!!! Congrats on a well-deserving win! Merry Christmas, gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Way to go Heather, this is very clever. I enjoyed it with all my heart.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:17:00 PM

    I think I don't have a chance in the contest with ones like these that I am seeing. REAlly creative! btw, thanks for your comment on my newest terzanelle but I had failed to include enough stanzas and quickly had to come up with a new one. whewwww.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Hi Heather very clever acrostic I like, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:49:00 AM

    Hi Heather, what a great Acrostic this is, enjoyed it very much, good luck in the contest. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:32:00 AM

    Heather very well done, I like,..David

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:30:00 AM

    lets hope it doesn't stop soon . Heather xx