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Echoes of Love

Echoes of Love Today when I looked into your eyes I couldn’t see your love’s reflection there I tried so hard to see the spark ignite Instead, I saw was an empty stare I tried to sense the warmth when I held you Though coldness took its place Your body was lifeless as if it knew I’ve already been replaced I tried to feel the fire in your kiss That used to leave the flames to burn Though all I felt was something that I missed A love we once shared that will never return I tried to hear the passion in your voice The moment you said my name Instead, I only heard echoes of love once enjoyed Times we lived in a lover’s flame Today I said goodbye Not to you out loud but through my soul Because it was there that you and I, Were supposed to be together and never grow old Just a made up poem, not personal.

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:59:00 AM

    Hi gail great write very sad, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:53:00 AM

    Hi Gail, what a terrific write my friend, and so glad to read that it is not personal. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Glad this isn't personal Gail but you have done it so well, so sad if the flame dies xx

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:44:00 AM

    This is such a sad write my friend! I felt the sadness deep within my heart with this incredible poem of yours! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous piece this morning! What a powerful write you have written here Gail! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:40:00 AM

    Hi Gail glad it's not personal. still like it though...David