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You know
It tells me all my stats
It tells me all my views
And yet I see one comment
How about you?
When I get the chance I read
I comment with my thoughts
I figured feedback
Was the reason for the box 
I'm not afraid to share my thoughts
Or how disappointing it is
To see that soups gone
From Sharing with each other
To the equivalent of ding ding ditch
So please if you have any thoughts
share them in the box
Don't be afraid
I wont bite 
As long as your proper in your thoughts

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  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:00:00 AM
    Real good read and i agree with you. I see so many views but no comments. Been reading a bunch of your free verse to gain a better appreciation for the free verse style.

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 11/22/2013 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! :3 I take that as a big compliment. . . Im my worst critic, so, even though I know Im good, I dont know how good. I suppose thats a good thing. . . Love to hear more of your thoughts :)
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 7:08:00 AM
    Bite anyway - J.A.B. %

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 11/22/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha of course :P
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 2:17:00 PM
    Pip-- pip and jolly good, know what I mean we all deserve, more comments do we not.

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 11/22/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think we all do :) I also think there should be a notification for when someone responds back like this. I answer or try to most of the time, but it seems pointless when you'll never know unless you search and look, or I tell you myself.
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:03:00 AM
    i like this, a positive way to get feedback, i agree with you,about the ding ding ditch, things are not like they use to be here... good poem, you deserve more comments here....

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 11/22/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you I really appreciate that Harry :)