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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:07:00 PM
    A sad view... thank you Lisa, for sharing your thoughts on this tragedy with your poetry... I feel for all...always~pd

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:01:00 PM
    Dear Lisa, that is a well-composed piece of literary and it is difficult to adequately express my gratutude to share it with us. It's lovely and quited delightful in front of that lost!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 9:16:00 AM
    This is a well-crafted and poignant piece about the mass shooting tragedy.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:40:00 PM
    yes, the shooter is going to suffer immeasurably and yet God in his infinite wisdom, only He knows the real things in the minds of the deranged people who commit these acts. I like where you took this theme. Very nice one.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:58:00 PM
    After reading this a second time, I see you are describing the very recent tragedy that took place up in Connecticut. You have described it all quite well.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Good write. Were you inspired by the Book of Revelation when you wrote this piece? This reminded me of the hit song by Alice Cooper titled "Only Women Bleed".

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    I based the poem on the connecticut ordeal
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:43:00 PM
    Great couplet rhyming and flow... a substantial piece which has given me a lot to consider. The children and the six adults are with God. May he bless the families whose dreams have been torn apart. Best wishes, Keith