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Stifled

The sun rose ablaze against blue__
Cobalt blue clouds, skies icy cold 
stifled my desire for porch view
oh! just a second to gaze_ behold.
  

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Sara , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the nice rhyme...pd

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 11:00:00 AM

    So you mansged to nip out in the nippy air Sara, Wishing you Gods blessings for the season.."

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 4:16:00 PM

    love this Sara, have a wonderful festive season...

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:27:00 PM

    Sara, stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:10:00 PM

    Hi Sara stunning as always, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:00:00 AM

    Hi Sara, what a great write my friend, loved the pause in the last line. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:37:00 AM

    gaze and take in the view form your porch Sara, it sounds just heavenly xx

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:34:00 AM

    This is stunning Sara. Thanks for sharing. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 8:45:00 AM

    This is a tremendously beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and wondrous poem this morning! You have inspired me to write my own sun, clouds, and sky poem Sara! It's formulating in my mind as I write this, we'll see how it goes, if I put it on the Soup or not! What a delightful piece you have written! I'm glad you shared it with us! Great Work!!