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Held in Her Grasp

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Held in Her Grasp

What is this power that she holds over me?
She holds my very soul within her grasp
I follow her, to the edge of the sea.

She looks at me and I can't help but Gasp.
Her spell transports me, to a brand new world.
She holds my very soul within her grasp.

Out of control as if being hurled.
Loves is multiplied, by two moons rising.
Her spell transports me, to a brand new world.

We become two planets, worlds colliding.
Attraction, beyond imagination.
Love is multiplied, by two moons rising

We are aligned in perfect position.
Our beings melded, nothing else exists.
Attraction, beyond imagination.

I may be her slave, still I won't resist.
Our beings melded, nothing else exists.
What is this power she holds over me?
I follow her, to the edge of the sea.

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
    You are so amazing with this form. I'm inspired to try it, but....I don't know if I can wing it. You make it fly. :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 4/27/2013 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have no doubt you would do an amazing job. Becca helped me master it, you should as her to help she is a good teacher.
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:13:00 PM
    It blows me away how good you are at this form, this is so beautiful. Thr repetition can become boring to read with forms like this, but you keep it very engaging! Great job :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:58:00 PM
    wow, Richard. This reads like a marvelous model of the form for your own fantasy contest! (minus the questionku chaser) You did a great terzanelle.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:21:00 AM
    Two thumbs up! Gorgeous finale! :D

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:31:00 AM
    Can't wait xx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/20/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    All done.
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Nice;y written my west coast compatriot! When will we see the rest? Cheers, Jake

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/20/2012 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack, tute fini.
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:55:00 PM
    Can't wait to see it in complete form :) must be great - hug, Yanny

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/20/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    On my way
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/20/2012 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    soupmail :)
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:34:00 PM
    Hello Richard, what a great start, will look forward to the completion. Rollo

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/20/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rollo, I hope you come back to read it. Take care.