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From A Humble Beginning

He laid in a manger... a feed trough for cattle;
A crudely made crib of an inn keeper’s chattel.
Straw lined this box, to make a soft bed,
Comforting the babe, where he laid his head.

A bright star shining, through dark of night
Lead three kings, with its guiding light,
From afar they followed, as it crossed the sky
To a manger in Bethleham, where the baby did lie.

They brought with them, fine gifts to share
Yet, nothing they offered, could compare,
To a greater gift Christ would offer to man;
God’s love and salvation, an infinite plan.

"Be not deaf, to what I say to thee
Open your hearts and praise GOD with me.
Do this in MY name, I beseech of you,
GOD'S reward is greater, than what riches can do.”

These events took place long, long ago,
Yet man's acceptance, is dreadfully slow.
Refusing Christ's offer until it’s too late,
Will bring everlasting regret... a resolute fate.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 10:13:00 PM

    Hi Robert; I really don't understand why. I don't see nothing wrong with it. I think it's great. May you and yours have a Merry Christmas and many blessings in the New Year. Lucilla

    Jerore Avatar Robert Jerore Date: 12/24/2012 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the compliment Lucilla. However, I did correct several words and structure of this poem. I check on my work periodically whether it is posted, or if I have to go to my original poem files. Once I change it here, I copy it and replace the original file. It's a habit and practice... YarnSpinner
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Robert, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    Jerore Avatar Robert Jerore Date: 12/21/2012 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You PD... Since I have no other way to send a greeting card personally, I placed one I dsesigned for all Poets to be seen, on the Wall Page of PoetrySoup.com. Happy Holidays to you too. YarnSpinner