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~ white snowflakes falling on my lips like sweet kisses I stand lost in this snow world I turn in circles the snow is falling, falling this landscape a frozen dream my raven hair wet hangs in clinging waves, dripping the snow is cold on my skin I am lost dreaming the snow is falling, falling my world frosty and surreal ~ Choka December 19, 2012

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  1. Date: 1/23/2013 11:26:00 PM
    A very nice choka for a cold winter day.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:40:00 AM
    A little Christmas visit to you Constance <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - //Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:16:00 AM
    A poem full of emotion, so well written.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 8:55:00 AM
    Constance this is beautiful, just love your raven hair, that gets the imagination going... have a wonderul festive season,, and stay well...

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Dear Constance,Dear Heart, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I have a Picture of YOU that I took of one of YOUR blogs from before. I looked at it while I read "my raven hair wet hangs in clinging waves, dripping" so vivid I felt I was standing next to YOU this is a favourite Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:48:00 PM
    This is the first Choka that I have ever read. Very nice.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:51:00 PM
    what a great choka, Constance. I can really envision you in this one. The imagery is so alive!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:17:00 PM
    This is sure beautiful and gorgeous my friend! I love the scenery you described here within this wondrous poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Constance I love these words and it is a long time since I have read a Choka here, well done..David

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Constance, a deep and epic image... a burr!! image... love the compelling feel, and the image of the wet raven hair... always~pd