Senryu 011

a little sin takes
the short cut to damnation...
babe it’s cold outside.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/26/2012 7:45:00 PM I got blankets... nice one.. pd
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/23/2012 6:11:00 AM soup
SCRIBE ML Date: 12/21/2012 7:26:00 PM This is a crafty one. I digg this poet!
Lucilla Carrillo Date: 12/21/2012 12:45:00 PM Oh yes. and i can feel it. good work. Merry Christmas and thanks for reading Another Tragedy. Many blessings. Lucilla
Cynthia Alvez Date: 12/21/2012 7:42:00 AM Clever Harry! I am smiling here! Cynthia
Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/20/2012 3:18:00 PM wow... Harry, hope you got the key... a good senryu...pd
Sara Kendrick Date: 12/19/2012 6:16:00 PM There must be a contest going on..Reads like a winner to me..Sin can ruin one's life for sure..Enjoyed reading this truth filled work this eve..Thanks for stopping by my work about "Rooster Feet and Dumplings"..Sara
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/19/2012 4:39:00 PM well crafted, harry!! Keep them coming. I am hungry for more of your poetry to see. Always am happy that you enjoy a sonnet of mine. LUv, Andrea
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/19/2012 1:54:00 PM A very well written Senryu, Harry. - You will be forgiven. - I hope Christmas will be blessed time for you and your family. - / / Anne-Lise :)
Dan Kearley Date: 12/19/2012 1:30:00 PM Oh so true! Some wise words here Harry..Thanks for always stopping by. :o)
Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/19/2012 1:04:00 PM I always imagined that it would be hot. The answer to your question Harry is Money. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
Rollo West Date: 12/19/2012 12:28:00 PM Hi Harry, what a great Senryu, really enjoyed reading it. Rollo
daver austin Date: 12/19/2012 10:44:00 AM That little sin could mean a hot time, eh, Harry. Love it. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/19/2012 10:10:00 AM ha like this, xx
Toquyen Harrell Date: 12/19/2012 9:44:00 AM Yes, a little sin can separate us from God. And it is COLD. Great write, Harry. Love ya, Toquyen
Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/19/2012 8:17:00 AM Very touched harry, great senryu :D
David Williams Date: 12/19/2012 7:37:00 AM ha ha, Harry very good....David