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Below is the poem entitled Comfortably Numb which was written by poet Tracie Edwards. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Comfortably Numb

i know what you know i know one of us has to go one of us has to become an ex-resident and that takes precedent we used to be able to calmly speak but your pummelling of my body left me weak restraining orders meant nothing to you so you just kept up doing the horrid things you do well i'm finally rid of you and my life is going well and everyday i pray you'll end up in hell treading water in the lake of fire you, a woman beater and prolific liar Why I can't move,I'm just suffocating Why evoke negative feelings in me Why fill me with hope Were you seeking some attention? Why I can't move I'm just suffocating Why evoke negative feelings in me Why fill me with hope Were you seeking some attention? I don't where I'm going I just feel like walking Never looking back Why do you generate this power over me? Don't change your criticism into request Why put my heart's feelings to a test? Now i don't know where I belong Or if i belong......... Do i just want to be gone? Were you so oblivious and blind Your words of sorry are hard to digest Why did you get to be the only one deciding? Tears start flowing from my eyes I don't know how to stay strong I just feel like I'm loosing all control All i know is my head wont stop pounding. My heart hurts Im numb Was i your obsession to ease your depression Was it was all a lie? Nothing but wasted time Why does it hurt so much? I just want to know why?
Written with help from a poetry friend, my verses are in bold..

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 8:42:00 AM
    So nice to read your work today, sometimes loving someone does feel just like this! I hope you are feeling better. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:23:00 AM
    Well done on this collab set of poems. What a horrible way to experience life in the hands of one who wants control. Wonderful write both of you. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:33:00 AM
    What a collab, well done xx

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Two strong poems on such a horrible topic. Of the two, the second shared more emotions...to me.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 6:19:00 PM
    He has problems so he made you feel weak so he could feel strong, stay far away from him BIG hugs!! Happy New Year Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:05:00 PM
    powerful write, Tracie - you write beautifully together. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Thanks very much - loved your contest. Congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 7:54:00 PM
    enjoyed reading both parts, thank you......Seren

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:08:00 AM
    I have to say that I really enjoyed your portion better than your friend...no offense to your friend! This is a fantastic and remarkable write my friend! I really loved reading your incredible poem this morning! What a powerful verse Tracie! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:58:00 AM
    Tracie a very good collab, I like both parts, hope you are ok and a Merry Christmas to you...David