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Sonic Stings

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Below is the poem entitled Sonic Stings which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sonic Stings

Watching wild Wasps
Fiercely flying forward
Sonic stings, sickly screams
Painfully piercing pandemonium



Experimenting with form I have not previously attempted.

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  1. Date: 7/9/2014 8:58:00 AM
    I like this alliteration Richard but wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of one of those stings....The third line is outstanding I can hear the screams...Tim

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/9/2014 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I forgot I wrote this one. I guess I have now written two of them.
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:59:00 PM
    What a clever poem. Alliteration with wonderful meter and meaning. Awesome!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/20/2012 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jon, Merry Christmas
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:20:00 PM
    The experiment was a success! FUN!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/19/2012 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jack!
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:29:00 PM
    Alliteration, this is new format for me, how it works?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/18/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you have to have the same sounding sound for the beginning of each word in the line. Watching Wild Wasps all have W sound. I may be wrong but this was my interpretation of the instructions.