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Sonic Stings

Watching wild Wasps
Fiercely flying forward
Sonic stings, sickly screams
Painfully piercing pandemonium



Experimenting with form I have not previously attempted.

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:59:00 PM

    What a clever poem. Alliteration with wonderful meter and meaning. Awesome!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/20/2012 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jon, Merry Christmas
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:20:00 PM

    The experiment was a success! FUN!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/19/2012 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack!
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:59:00 PM

    I've never written one in this style. very nice putting together of words and sounds. :) soup mail..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/18/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    On my way.
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Alliteration, this is new format for me, how it works?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/18/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you have to have the same sounding sound for the beginning of each word in the line. Watching Wild Wasps all have W sound. I may be wrong but this was my interpretation of the instructions.