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12 Days

On the twelfth day of Christmas
my happy honey sent me twelve heavy honeycombs 
                             with eleven live busy bees buzzing around
                             hungrily l ploughed my mouth into them
and lol ten sharp stings were drilled into me in return
at nine o`clock  l was whizzed to a funny family doctor 
                            who robotically administered eight jumping jabs 
                            on me without as much as a wink for his antics 
l actually saw seven stars of dizziness with my naked eyes … and slept  
for six silent hours like a dull dumped puppy pumpkin 
                           upon  waking up the love of my life was there
                           softly smooching me five times per minute  non-stop!
telling me four fake ways of dreaming sweet dreams
three ways of avoiding snoring silly like a noisy tractor!
                          and two wayward ways of making us 
                          one happy couple on a Christmas Day
 

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 6:00:00 PM

    Ohh, I love it!! Too funny, Ndaba :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Great job!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Yes you may use my comments to you in your new book. Please let me know when it is for sale. I don't know when I will be at Poetrysoup but you can always email me at my home email. Thank you my friend. Love, Carol

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 1/17/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much. I will certainly update you about this new publication. My friend Carol, keep writing .Keep well!
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 10:59:00 PM

    Congratulation Ndaba my poet.. for your win.... like your write my friend :) have a great day <3<3<3

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 1/11/2013 3:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sukmawati, thank you my friend. If you like this one, then wait for the release of THE DEAD MUST BE SOBBING, as there is more there!
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Congratulations friend Ndaba on your win..I like it..Hugs,Mary

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 1/9/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, friend Mary. Watch out for my upcoming poetry anthology titled "THE DEAD MUST BE SOBBING". It features this piece and 80 other sizzling poems. It`s coming out in a few months` time. l count on your support!!!
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:25:00 AM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 1/8/2013 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by.
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 5:17:00 PM

    Very nice. Sound like you two had a great Christmas my wife and I had one too.

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 1/3/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good to hear you and your wife had a great Christmas. Thanks for the inspiration.
  1. Date: 12/27/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Su

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/27/2012 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Suzette, thanks. Happy holidays.
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!Very interesting write!...

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/26/2012 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 12/26/2012 12:59:00 PM

    congrats for your win with this very creative holiday poem!

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 7:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Ndaba, all the best for the New Year xx

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/26/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy, l appreciate your message. l wish you and your family a successful New Year.
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Ndaba, ;-) Congratulations with your little Christmas win... have a nice one... always~ PD

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/26/2012 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hope you had a great Christmas. Thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:13:00 PM

    unique and sweet and fun, all rolled into one!

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/23/2012 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, thank you. Have a great Christmas and a happy New Year!