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Inside a Deep Pine Forest


Inside a deep pine forest where morning mist still lingers an unknown bird takes away my unfinished dreams. Dappled light touches grass tips wakes them up with soft caress whispers to them morning song kisses tiny crowns. Light and shade play hide and seek among them now all my dreams waiting for butterfly wings to take a new flight. ################## By :kash poet

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Good poem Kash~Yours truly *SKAT

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Simple, yet so much deeper than at first glace--Love this Kash!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:04:00 AM

    This is a beauty, Kash......(should be higher on the list in my estimation)...sometimes the softest poems are the ones that touch me deeply. Just lovely!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:13:00 PM

    Kash, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:34:00 AM

    amazing poetry, congrats here,,,,

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:15:00 PM

    congratulations for your very well deserved win, kashinath. I loved it just as much the second time around.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:12:00 PM

    Howdy Kash, nice~ SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:59:00 PM

    KASH, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Perfectly done Kash, beautiful images and a well deserved first!

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:11:00 AM

    How beautiful! Waiting for butterfly wings..thats lovely. Congrats. BG

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 3:46:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your super win too, my dear friend Kash! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 2:43:00 AM

    congrads on such a lovely nostalgic write, awesome DaDA...simply awesome.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Nice one Kash, congrats ...Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win kash. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:51:00 PM

    Congrats on your creative and descriptive winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Beautiful and nice,Kash...Wonderful presentation...Congrats on your well deserved win...

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:58:00 PM

    You get a great job Kash! A full tale in 3 verses. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:25:00 PM

    congratulations on your fantastic win! Beautiful imagery. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:37:00 PM

    Beautiful write and congratulations .....thanks for sharing...mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:07:00 PM

    Congratulations Kash on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 7:04:00 PM

    We all take away something different when we read a poem, Kash. For me, the image of a bird flying away with your unfinished dreams is exquisite! What a scene of imagination..u crafted this one so well. Russell is bound to have at the very very top of the list...gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:14:00 PM

    Was nice to see you popping in today!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:27:00 AM

    DO YOU EVER VISIT BULGARIAN DEEP PINE FOREST. IT IS TERRIFIC. YOU STEP IN THE DEEP GREEN GRASS, BREATH CLEAR AND SHINING AIR AND SMELL THE PINE BLOOD. BULGARIA IS UNIQUE.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:10:00 PM

    wow, I love how you pulled it together in the last stanza,making the butterfly a dream about to get wings and take flight. Great word you used, dappled. love seeing you do a gem like this, Kashinath. Guess what? I got a new cat today but right now she is hiding, that's how cats act first day in a new house. her name is Razzmatazz and she's pure black, shiny smooth like satin!!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:52:00 PM

    Excellent doditsu here Kash. Lovely imagery and beautiful words flow through this poem of yours. Wish you great luck with this entry.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:08:00 PM

    this is lovely!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Love this Dodoitsu you penned Kash. Love the descriptiveness as well Have a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:30:00 PM

    A lovely little poem, Kash. - Luck in contest. - ***** - I want to wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas! - I hope Santa Clause does not forget you this year either. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Hi Kash long time no read for me but glad I did today this is so full of great imagery, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 10:11:00 AM

    Kash, wondeful image, good luck...David