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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/8/2013 1:19:00 PM
Grin...next time stick out your foot and trip the dude ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 1/2/2013 2:06:00 PM
I like mysteries; I don't want them to disappear: there is already too much knowledge and people learn to feel so cold and indifferent to life's marvelous occurences....... I prefer to preserve mystery and innocence and bright sparkling eyes, awaiting wonders, miracles and big surprises around the bend of unconsciousness and unawareness and diffuse feelings and sensations and intuitive, creative imagination... Have a very happy new year, dear Joann! God bless you and your family. Love, Hanitra
kathryn collins
Date: 12/30/2012 12:19:00 PM
Dear Joann - This is absolutely captivating
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM
Good morning, Joann,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/22/2012 5:26:00 PM
this was great metaphor, Joann. Congrats for your win!!
Gwendolen R.
Date: 12/22/2012 3:03:00 PM
F A V O R I T E !!!!!!!
Gwendolen R.
Date: 12/22/2012 3:04:00 PM
draggin' it off to my treasure trove of favs :)
Gwendolen R.
Date: 12/22/2012 3:02:00 PM
Wow Weeee! I love intellectual ones like these, Joann! So glad to see your talent being displayed...metaphorical delight! Hurry....write another!!! luv, gwendolen
olusegun Arowolo
Date: 12/22/2012 2:21:00 PM
Lovely words of wisdom....Great write,wonderful piece...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...
SCRIBE ML
Date: 12/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
Masterpiece! I have to fave this. Just stopping by for some of your wisdom and wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2012 6:44:00 PM
this is such an interesting extended metaphor! I really enjoyed seeing this.
Russell Sivey
Date: 12/18/2012 9:05:00 AM
And it made you a genius, as this creative poem surely took a brilliant person to write! This is totally awesome my friend! I truly loved this delightful and intriguing write here Joann! You are surely a wondrous poet to write such a powerful piece, I love it! What a enlightening piece, Great Work!!