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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:19:00 PM

    Grin...next time stick out your foot and trip the dude ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:06:00 PM

    I like mysteries; I don't want them to disappear: there is already too much knowledge and people learn to feel so cold and indifferent to life's marvelous occurences....... I prefer to preserve mystery and innocence and bright sparkling eyes, awaiting wonders, miracles and big surprises around the bend of unconsciousness and unawareness and diffuse feelings and sensations and intuitive, creative imagination... Have a very happy new year, dear Joann! God bless you and your family. Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Dear Joann - This is absolutely captivating

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Good morning, Joann,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 5:26:00 PM

    this was great metaphor, Joann. Congrats for your win!!

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 3:03:00 PM

    F A V O R I T E !!!!!!!

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 12/22/2012 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    draggin' it off to my treasure trove of favs :)
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Wow Weeee! I love intellectual ones like these, Joann! So glad to see your talent being displayed...metaphorical delight! Hurry....write another!!! luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Lovely words of wisdom....Great write,wonderful piece...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Masterpiece! I have to fave this. Just stopping by for some of your wisdom and wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:44:00 PM

    this is such an interesting extended metaphor! I really enjoyed seeing this.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:05:00 AM

    And it made you a genius, as this creative poem surely took a brilliant person to write! This is totally awesome my friend! I truly loved this delightful and intriguing write here Joann! You are surely a wondrous poet to write such a powerful piece, I love it! What a enlightening piece, Great Work!!