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Give Me A Prayer

I wish to ride on a shooting star and make all my dreams come true; Give me a prayer that I can sing A chorus for world to lose the blue. I wish to make a prayer for peace for all the people living; that I can sing, give me a prayer to bring back calmness, bliss attaining. I wish to call upon all forces, To release all frustrations; Give me a prayer that I can sing, bringing peace to all generations. I wish for mankind to live in peace in sweet harmonious strains; that I can sing, give me a prayer serenading earth with rainbow stains.
18/12/2012

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Congrats, Yasmin. Excellent. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on another win Yasmin you are an inspiration to us all xx

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:16:00 AM

    Yasmin congrats on your win. Nicely done Rhyme. Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:44:00 PM

    Dear Yas congrats for this awesome win.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:35:00 PM

    HELLO YASMIN, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:03:00 PM

    HI my sweet Valentine.. my star..my sunshine...beautiful Poetess Yasmin...<3 how i adore and love your poems... wishing you have a very beautiful Valentine <3 <3 <3 much luv and hugs !!! Suku <3

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 11:47:00 AM

    This is a very good poem, with a very good rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 5:07:00 AM

    nice write Yasmin,check out my PRAYER 2013,SING,PRAY AND BE UPLIFTED...

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 7:06:00 PM

    To my dear dear loving poetry friend,yAsminovah...I pray that this poetic dream could some day come true...u can sing to me this pray anytime! The last line on this poem is very nicely penned...rainbow stains...ahhh....ohhh...ahhh...HAPPY NEW YR! luv, gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:21:00 AM

    Merry Christmas Yas dear to you and yours! and wow! is that your daughter here?

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 1:49:00 AM

    you write so well mum.. was a pleasure reading your work. tc

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:31:00 PM

    A quick visit to your nice poem,Yasmin. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:05:00 PM

    Oh,, my you want me to say it right,,,, okay here it goes... Move over and let me take a ride with you on that wishing star... :-) ha ha... I am with you on the prayer for peace.. God knows we need it... and one other thing... I can hear you wishing in the most harmonious way, painting rainbows for all to see....xox~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:30:00 AM

    Yas, your sweet heart wishing for such kind wishes for this world. Crossing my fingers and hope that they come true!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:21:00 AM

    This is a delightful wishing poem my friend! I too wish for glorious peace, a lofty desire to hope will come true! You have written a brilliant and enlightening poem here Yasmin! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous piece this morning, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:30:00 AM

    I think this is it. And a beautiful prayer at that.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:07:00 AM

    very beautiful poem