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Brink of fantasy

Velvety world of such pleasant fantasy Ah! the splendor of sweet hallucination The perfect mirage of dreamy ecstasy. Feathery caress, a soft innate fascination Alluring, tempting flickers of rippling illusion.. Ah! the splendor of sweet hallucination. A collage of desires, radiant colors' fusion My delusional mind paints images vivid, Alluring, tempting flickers of rippling illusion. Waking from dormancy, all bright and livid Ethereal, elusive dreams I long to embrace, My delusional mind paints images vivid! Daunting surreal horizons, an unending chase, Bubbles of fantasy, drift me off from bleak reality Ethereal, elusive dreams, I long to embrace. Merge me with the Universe's soul, single entity, velvetty world of such pleasant fantasy Bubbles of fantasy, drift me off from bleak reality The perfect mirage of dreamy ecstasy! dreams on my eye lash fluttering all night long.. will rays dispel them? 18/12/2012

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:48:00 AM

    yesha, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:14:00 AM

    Yesha congrats on your win, very beautiful words...David

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:49:00 AM

    Awesome poem friend Yesha. Congratulations on your win :) Happy New Year!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:18:00 AM

    congrats on ur well deserved win...

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yesha luv, i am proud to share a spot with you xx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Yesha.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:49:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this and the wee verse at the end wrapped it all up with a bow! Congrads on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:40:00 PM

    A poem of ecstasy and beauty, congrats Yesha on your win xxx

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:59:00 PM

    Well done, difficult form.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 12:47:00 PM

    truly superb,Yesha ...good luck for the contest

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Beautifull poem Yesha! - A little Christmas visit to you. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug!!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 12:53:00 PM

    What a beautifully kaleidoscopic poem. If this is in a contest it should be a winner.

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 12:07:00 PM

    This is going to be on the winners list, if it is for Richard's contest which I assume it is! This is really awesome

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Yesha, I was surprised to realize I had not done enough stanzas for the terzanelle I wrote and I added one in and revised a bit. Thanks for reading mine. I hope it looks better now.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve...I am glad that I chose this one to read..I hope that the good dreams continue and not be dispelled by the morning sun..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:21:00 PM

    this is a really cool poem! I am excited to see so many people trying this poetry form. the judges of these kinds of contests are doing Soupers a big favor by making them stretch their creative wings with poems such as this one!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Yesha, your Terzanelle is truly beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it, best of luck in the contest. Constance

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:50:00 PM

    this is wonderful Yesha, truly superb...

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Velvety words for sure, Yesha, thoroughly enjoyed! Jag

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:08:00 AM

    Yesha you paint a beautiful image with very alluring words, I like a lot...David