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Beckoning me

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Beckoning me

The garden gate gently calls out to me
Blowing in the breeze like a young girls dress 
Showing to me the unobtainable
So many emotions I must suppress. 

Freedom calls beckoning me to follow
Fingers curved in, teasing me to go on
Shall I shan't I decisions to be made
What's out there making me wish to be gone

Is it the promise of a special meal
Or a day in the health spa to look good 
Guess its none of these things that makes me feel
Like escaping through that gate by the wood

It's the Sales bargains to be got
Must go now or I will miss the lot.

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 2:14:00 PM
    love this Seren, told as it really is,, only you can make the decission good luck,

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    would I go to the sales and spend lots of pennies,as if lol....Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Just remember you will only be returning it in a few days, save yourself a journey, don't go lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha thats true, what looks good in the shop looks crap when you get it home ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Hi Seren delightful lol, good look in the sales, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol thanks Owen, anything you want me to look out for, for yourself....Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 10:15:00 AM
    When I was gainfully employed before retiring, sales meant nothing to me. NOW I'm the OLD GEEZER COUPON KING!!! Merry Christmas! Love Jack

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nadolig Llawen Jack. Your not old just matured like fine wine or cheese whichever tickles your fancy. ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:08:00 AM
    Sales are the best. Only way to buy. Thanks for sharing your witty write Seren. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    True Connie one four lettered word I like SALE.....Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:38:00 AM
    LOL, you go girl. And don't forget. It's Christmas so hubby can pay for the whole lot. Go crazy! What a fun poem.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No hubby, so the paying stays here. Lol. Thanks for stopping by....Seren
    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/18/2012 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sending you soup mail
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:53:00 AM
    Hi Seren don't melt your plastic now...resist ha ha ha...I like ...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops. Resist*
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Residt omg Dafydd you joke.....Seren