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A Magical Carpet Ride

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A Magical Carpet Ride

Come fly with me to heaven's door On a magical carpet ride We'll explore the mighty universe Reach the mystical worlds on high We can only guess what secrets lie Beyond the heavenly spheres Another world like ours you say? We'll probably never know I fear Travelling through time and outer space Our minds are overwhelmed by it all Viewing our planet from way out there A shimmering blue and green ball Come fly with me above the stars And view nature's mighty plan Feel the vastness of the universe Put it all into place if you can © Jack Ellison 2012

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:55:00 PM

    This is really a huge imaginary things Jack, I felt my vision become blooming in wide after reading yours, I will fave this one :D, wishing you a great and wonderful day Jack - hug, yanny

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are very kind my friend... thank you! Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Wonderful New Year! Love, Jack
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 3:04:00 PM

    I really like the premise of this poem, with your imagination I think you could take this one much further. I was just starting to get into it when it ended.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Think I had my head in the clouds with this one! Maybe I will expand it... Jake the Snake
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:26:00 PM

    You must know you'll be filling up that magic carpet with all of us here at PoetrySoup. We're all a bunch of adventerous souls... Merry Christmas!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Climb aboard... everybody's welcome! LOL Love, Jack xox
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:37:00 PM

    Exciting ride that you have aptly described in this work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are kind my dear Sara! Hope the upcoming Christmas season is a joyous one filled with friends and happy times... love, Jack
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:25:00 PM

    love this it is so cool makes me want to fly away thanks for sharing it an thank you for you comment on my wite your friend Nita

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a bunch, my dear Nita! Hope the Christmas season brings you much happiness! Love and big hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Hi Jack, really loved this write, full of outstanding imagery. Rollo

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A very nice review of my trip to fantasy land! Your kind words are very much appreciated, my good friend! Merry Christmas!
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 8:06:00 AM

    I would love to ride on a magical carpet, that would be fun! Going into space is only a dream I would love to experience, so it must be a magical carpet that would take me there. I love this incredible poem my friend! Very ingenious and fun, Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/18/2012 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are very kind my friend! Thank you and have a very Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year! Cheers, Jack