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Sinking

Subdued sorrow
seeps from swollen eyes,
and severed sobs 
stab into the surrounding
silence.
I'm suffocating in a sea
of separation,
struggling to stay
afloat but I'm 
sinking fast.
Somebody save me
before it swallows
me whole.

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Hi Katie, I can feel the desolation in this one..I'm sure the darkness will disappear and the light will return..So many of us has been there before.. Regards, Ken..

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 4:36:00 PM
    I can feel the angst and dispair with every line. I am certain we have all been here before- but I assure you- with the clarity spoken in your words of this gorgeous poem- I am certain you will thrive and make it out alive! :)

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:41:00 PM
    wonderful write Katie,the emergency units are on there way lol

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM
    I`ve had that feeling quite a few times over the years.Excellent poem,Katie.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Poignant write Katie! I like the imagery used. The way you've used the sea to signify the depth of feeling caused by separation and the despair brought out in the sinking - brilliantly done. The angst is clearly defined. Very well done.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 9:12:00 PM
    I like your poem very much. It's tender, soft and sweet. Just what I needed to hear thank you.