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unfaithful friends

 You think there kool,but really there 
fools.they talk behind your back.i 
watch as everything go bad.im by 
myself and lost in this whole 
world,what did i do to get a unfaithful 
friend? I cry everyday knowing 
everythings not the same.I grow 
everyday my mind and my heart 
rate.i want somebody who i can trust 
and push my thought on.knowing im 
in pain.could someone lead the way 
so i can get away from this unfaithful 
friend?

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  1. Date: 2/2/2013 2:42:00 PM

    friend is a strong word,we misunderstand friendship for people we are acquainted with,there is a difference some people are just around for negativity,friends play a positive role,choose wisely Ebony

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:34:00 AM

    friends are few, and a few are loyal friends the few we have betray us too, its painful, i can feel your pain through your wonderful poem, Ebony, -Lucas-

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:19:00 PM

    Poignant write Ebony! It's never easy when someone we consider a friend breaks our trust but I guess it's better to find out than to live in ignorance. Well penned poem!