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Autumn Hill

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Autumn Hill

I can see the crows circling over my head
It can only mean
I'm already dead
I can see the sunset as it turns to red
Where I'll go to die
Prepare my bed

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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Sheesh, you are so creative! This is my kind of poem - short, but so jam-packed with imagery and ideas that it leaves the reader thinking about it long after the read.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 2:18:00 PM
    Hello Caleb, yes it is nice to see you here on the soup.. does this mean you will join my contest again... ;-)... about your poem... a deep poem and image of waiting for rain..LOL..okay kidding about the rain. death and beds do not mix well... however, one can only fix his or her bed before sunset and sunrise.. your poem is deep..thank you for the hi... hoping to stop by again tonight... xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:40:00 AM
    WOW, I just love a poem like this one. How good it is to see you back, Caleb and thanks for letting me know by visiting some of my poetry. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 7:33:00 AM
    Caleb glad you are posting again, I like the very strong image you have painted, and it has a deifinite end...David

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Hi there Caleb, long time no see but at least you are back with an interesting write xx