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Beautiful Lies

Because of eyes as warm as honey, I was melting, but the love I first believed was shown me in his gaze was but a lie. He uttered not a word; I was deceived! He leaned in for that first romantic kiss. I melted more; my heart did somersaults. How easily that man could bring me bliss. But I would learn his luscious lips were false! His gorgeous body, hard, pressed into me. I felt his fingers softly touch my skin. I totally dissolved! How cleverly he’d worked unspoken lies on me again! That young man with his beautiful brown eyes at last destroyed me with his beautiful lies. English Sonnet written 12/14/12 (late at night as most of my sonnets are!) for the Beautiful Lies Poetry Contest of craig cornish and now for PD's contest

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:06:00 AM

    congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:35:00 PM

    WOW....LOVE IT ANDREA,,,,,, SKAT

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:39:00 PM

    Howdy, Andrea, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:26:00 PM

    awesome nate

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 11:52:00 PM

    Lovely words Andrea, Mandy and I will sort him out for you lol..........Seren

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Funny, Seren! I exaggerated this poem and if I could name any one guy this poem describes, he is so far away in my past I would not even know how to find him so you and Mandy could beat him up for me!haha
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:04:00 AM

    Here we go Andy flexing the fingers, love this one and he sounds dreamy lol congratulations xx

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:04:00 PM

    Andrea, a wonderful winning poem~ PD

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 9:57:00 PM

    congrats Andrea....enjoyed..

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:37:00 PM

    Yo Andrea, A fun write on the theme--many congratulations!--mail

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Dear Andrea, congrats on your win. I loved the ending two lines. lol

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Go sonneteers! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 2:59:00 AM

    We all have been victims of CUPID, this winged-tyrant of our hearts. He leaves us something though: The moment we believed in and the poems we write afterwards. Wonderful suffering that the sweet arrows of CUPID had in store for us. Marvelous poem! Thank you.

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 8:38:00 PM

    I guess we all had someone who told us lies while looking into our eyes. A wonderful poem. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:20:00 PM

    A very interesting read and well written, too. You have a gift for sonnets.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:58:00 AM

    mine was a blue-eyed liar. great entry for the contest Andrea. ( Honey is working out fine, she still has trust issues , but she very rarely hisses or bites anymore, only if you make a sudden move that scares her a lot)

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:36:00 PM

    I love this Andrea,,,, I know some brown eyes myself ;} I hope this is a win. thank you for reading my " Market Place" I was watching Anime on utube. Then I wrote it,,,, thinking of lost/ sex trafficking kids ;}

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:38:00 AM

    Awesome sonnet here Andrea! Tempting romance penned in your now trademark Sonnet form on beautiful lies. Great luck with this my dear and have yourself a nice time enjoying Christmas holidays with your family.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:00:00 PM

    awesome write :) thanks for the comment.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 8:14:00 PM

    Oh my, this is an awesome poem. Nicely done - JH

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Wow! An amazing Sonnet. I wish you success in the Contest. The story of a lustful and licentious youth is beautifully narrated. Thanks for visiting my poem The Aging Tree. I am glad you like it. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Young love is filled with it's trevails. It's not a wonder that it fails. Each coin has sides no one can win. Imagine if he had a twin. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Certainly kicked it through the uprights. Peace.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:48:00 PM

    i was born in Vegas. i mean some of my family lives in Texas, i've been there but never lived there lol everythings too big in texas /: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:47:00 PM

    Men and their games. /: the best thing to do is just leave and forget those kind of guys. like you told me once about my ex Fade.if you remember.i took your advice and eventually let him 'fade' away months ago, it worked too,so thanks! i've realized a lot of things as i've gotten older^_^& appreciate the compliment on my avatar,it was actually a picture taken from my hs graduation back in June.but when did i tell you i lived in Texas?xD i honestly don't remember,maybe BUFFY FOOKS said that??lol

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 8:35:00 AM

    Very passionate words you have penned here Andrea...shame with that young man.You should have done what Daver has suggested below:)

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Now that's good...been missing reading you!

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 3:04:00 PM

    that's a beautiful and romantic Sonnet poem,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Yes yes yes, this is an amazing, sonnet, i really enjoyed this Andrea... Oh the captcha, says BEST can't argue with that...

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 2:26:00 PM

    Dear Andrea, Congratulations, may I be the first to say. Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A man such as this could also destroy me, if one believes this Exceptional Write to be a ""Universal""Experience" That all men tell lies. Do YOU really LOVE Someone if YOU would lie to them. I never did. Ask Lenore. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Well another exellent piece from you Andrea; surely this will take a prize at The top, thanks for your latest comment.."

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