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Stuck in a world, she can't find her place
Feeling like noone cares, 
looking for away out of this evil crule place she calls home
her mother pretends like nothing is happening 
she pretty much raises her 7 year old brother and her 9 and 10 year old sisters
she thinks that she isn't brave anymore
that all happyness is gone
she tries, so hard, she ends up with a fork in the road
noone sees it coming
she can't leave her brother and her sisters behind, 
they are the only things keeping her alive, 
her father is crule, sick, twisted, so many ways to discribe him 
she's afraid that if she tells, she'll be taken away from her siblings 
she's tries to hide behind her walls, she paints up her walls
she tries and tries and yet...
She's still stuck in a world where she can't find her place

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:45:00 PM
    I know the feeling. Deep piece.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:10:00 PM
    beautiful words.... good write

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    Date: 12/14/2012 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why thank you very much T... :)