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love needs love

Love needs love in return
Like hunger needs food

Love needs love
Like order needs rules

Love needs love in return
Like sickness needs healing

Love needs love
Like secrets need revieling

Love needs love in return
Like thirst needs water

Love needs love
Like trust needs a promise

Love needs love in return
Like homeless need a home

Love needs love
Like desire needs hope

Love needs love in return
To aid those needing help

Love needs love
When love is by itself

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:23:00 PM

    So if the needsaremettperhaps there isperfection. Can love be perfect, likke the rose that is perfect, the thorn is there. Much to think on John. Love it, fave it and devour it, I do!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:50:00 AM

    That is my motto for this year. It is a year of love. I will try and love all who come across my path. Love is the greatest gift. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:50:00 AM

    going to my fav

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:31:00 AM

    Lovely write John! I love how you've used different scenarios to emphasize on the theme. Very well done!

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:53:00 AM

    true love has no conditions, is unconditional...checked your soupmail lately?

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 12/25/2012 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Agape love belongs to those we create. Conditions create the love we make
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 11:46:00 AM

    Brilliantly written. Loved the message.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:53:00 PM

    But I think love is unattainable..

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 12/15/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love needs love in 'return. Look at the return parts.
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:27:00 PM

    The circle of love is a golden ring It is endless and timeless, xxxx