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50 Shades Of Gold

Take me beat me and mold me
I am yours to do with what you wish
No matter what you do with me
I am still considered quite a dish.

I can modify your hardness
I can let you know when to boil
I can conduct a heat in you
And I will never let you spoil.

I don’t react harshly, if you get me moist and wet
You’ll still love me in the morning, on that I think I’ll bet
I will still be malleable, no matter what you do
You can beat me to transparency, and yes you see right through.

I am a bright yellow colour, with a lustre some would die for
Keeping me in condition, would never become a chore
If you really wanted too, you can put me in your mouth
I can even adorn your body parts, North, West, East and South…

I don’t react to an acid tongue, except those that are vitriolic
But you can dissolve me with the acid, called nitro hydrochloric.
You can pour me when I’m so very hot too hot for you to play
Then you can finger me when I have cooled, and play with me all day

You can eat off me, or with me, the choice will be yours
They say I came from outer space, in fact in meteors
But one thing I will say I don’t wear out or lose my lustre, it is told
So if you pick me up treat me well, I am you little nugget of gold.

© 14/12/2012 ~GG~ 

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:27:00 AM

    An extraordinary write. I'm in awe with your creativity and imagination. An excellent job Mandy. Warm Smiles Always, Connie. PS I love the title too.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:52:00 PM

    Too hot, Mandy. Lol. Enjoyed!

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    Thanks Torquyen love xx
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:17:00 PM

    i see a golden poem here, sensual, descriptive, well written!

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    Thanks Sandra xx
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:01:00 PM

    This reminds me of Jennifer Hutson."no no no no way I'm living without you. I'm not living without you I'm not living without you. I don't want to be free.lm staying, I'm staying. And you and you and you, you going to love me!!!

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Amazingly sensual write, Mandy! A treat! Happy Holidays! Love, Annalise

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 12:17:00 PM

    Wow Mandy, what an outstanding poem this is, great write. Rollo

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

    wow would i just love to handle all this, that is gold...brilliant poem.. brilliant poet

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:29:00 AM

    Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. YOU awe me with YOUR Vivid description. I can see, The Forging of a Beautiful Soul. Superb Pen. "I am your little nugget of gold." Yes YOU Are. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Mandy love this is defo, gold...David

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:55:00 AM

    What an amazing play on words Mandy... i loved it from being to end.. xxx

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    Thanks Tracie love xx
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Love the title. Definitely got my attention. I dig it. How precious. I enjoyed Roberts comment too. Looks like he read the book. Great write Mandy.

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    Maybe I should have Jon Lol xx
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:32:00 AM

    And when you were laid on the kitchen table, your portion was seasoned,the spice was sprinkled on to your netherlands,infused in the crevasses where the honey oozes,wielding a magic wand.

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    okayyyy lol xx