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Dear God

Dear God, If I could have a Christmas wish It would be of a selfless gift. A wish full of love, hope and faith. That one day my dad is saved. His lungs are shutting down by the day And his liver is toast you see. His skin is a yellowish color And he has lost a lot of weight. I understand he did this to himself, But please lord I need your help. Surrounded by candles on this night He is too weak to continue to fight. I can see the pain in his eyes. The look of hopelessness he is trying to hide. Please lord do you hear my cry? For my dad to survive, If I could have a Christmas wish It would be for my dad to live.

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  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Hi Cory, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:10:00 AM
    So sad Cory, lovely words......Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:47:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Cory love xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:21:00 AM
    dear Cory.. so sorry and so sad to read your write.. keep faith and prayers to make your strong and may God listen to our prayers.. nice share.. luv <3<3<3 Sk