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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:09:00 AM
    wow, the ending of this is really fantastic. What I lost is what I see now. So profound.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea....love , Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 8:23:00 AM
    Wow, this is really good Mehnaz. In some ways your use of words remind me of my friend Yanny's work. I love the imagery and all the layers within your writing.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    really? thank you for stopping by love,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Mehnaz, your writing is truly fantastic, well done. Constance

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Constance, love ,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 3:49:00 PM
    like this very profound poem,

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    a big thank you ,Harry...love,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Wow, what a strong poem Mehnaz, i really enjoyed my reading, thank you ror your support in my page, you are really enlighten my day :D

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Than You Yanny....so kind of you,love/hugs Mehnaz