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Phone rings

Telephone wire
line of birds pruning ...
Phone rings they all fall downnnnnnn

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Funny one Seren, many congrats on your win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/20/2012 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Craig.... Seren
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:04:00 PM

    Seren, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/19/2012 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol did I wow thats good to know....Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:46:00 PM

    just saw the note you wrote under my last comment to this one. funny to think of those birds and their reactions. Congrats on your win with this.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/18/2012 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea for commenting....Seren
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Sassy love. There is life without soup then, even if it is a poorly boy lol. He woke up but is settling down to sleep again now I have cooled him down a bit xx

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 11:12:00 AM

    oh, this makes quite a funny picture . COOL one, seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Andrea, I often wondered if they have any affect to their feet with all the calls made....Seren
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 3:33:00 AM

    great visual effect Seren .. thankxx so much for my win in Fishing luv .. so appreciate the honor luv ..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/16/2012 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thats my pleasure Linda, have to think of a cookie one next lol...Seren
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 8:34:00 AM

    wow the vibrations, a lot to think about here..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/15/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol good vibrations....Seren
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Just wondering if your old enough to know what a party line was.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/14/2012 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No not old enough, but i do know what they are, when 2 households share same line to exchange.....Seren
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Really good Seren, got a laugh out of this one. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/14/2012 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thats good Rollo thats why I try to write funny ones to bring a smile to someone....Seren
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:56:00 AM

    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..I have often wondered if the birds can feel words as they pass along the wires...Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:56:00 AM

    Ha ha don't forget ellipsis xx