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Beyond The Trees - Rondelet

Grass waves in trembles, all alone

Beyond the trees

Long shadows creep from twilight's throne

Beyond the trees

Where sun takes leave and stars are honed
 
Nay a whisper, nor farewell tone

Beyond the trees




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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Poor grass...out there all alone...just waving...loaded with strong scenes of my favorite setting--outdoors. Then u leave me wondering the magnificence of Twilight's throne...unimaginable beauty! gwendolen :)

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 3:54:00 PM

    Carrie this is beautiful as are all the poems you write---there is that special something about phrasing like Sinatra could do to a song that many others have sung before but his version was---well---special. Have a very Merry Christmas Carrie !

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 11:11:00 AM

    Merry Christmas to you and your family Carrie. Thinking of you. Have a wonderful new year. hugs phyl

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:32:00 AM

    congrats on this superb winner Carrie, have a wonderful festive season...

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:09:00 PM

    Carrie, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:41:00 AM

    This one creates a distinctive mysterious feeling. Though short, it has some powerful imagery that you should be proud of. I am glad this did well for you in the contest. Have a merry Christmas!

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie love xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:13:00 PM

    Though this is a short form I really like it! I guess it's because I am a sucker for repitition! And you used it so effectively creating mystery..I saw one of those black cut paper scenes in my mind...congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Best of luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:02:00 PM

    I love your entry, Carrie. Hope it's at the top of the list!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:49:00 PM

    Simply beautiful.