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Life Oozes

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Life Oozes

Written by Gail DeBole 
on December 13, 2012


Thrust onto the ground -
Woven miracle of twigs;
The spilled egg cracks.



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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 4:23:00 AM
    expand, expand, a good shorty like this makes you curious but then I think you should follow it up.

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:32:00 AM
    amazing Haiku..

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 4:29:00 PM
    great title for this! an interesting haiku theme.

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Gail, not a good fall... but a goof haiku,,, always...pd

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:57:00 PM
    nice haiku

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:17:00 PM
    The year 2012 is almost over. - I thank you for all the nice poem you have shared with me, and that you have taken the time to read and comments my poems. - Always pleasant, I appreciate your visit. - I have enjoyed a lot here at P-Soup and made many good friends. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:59:00 PM
    WOW this haiku give me something to think about.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:33:00 PM
    wonderful Haiku Gail,tried my first haiku recently,posted it,Love Train

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Love it !!! - Well written Gail ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Hi Gail great haiku, hope this nest was not broken by the human hand, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:35:00 AM
    Lovely images created! Beautiful Haiku Gail!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:03:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this one, Gail.