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OLD WOUNDS- tanka contest

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OLD WOUNDS- tanka contest

the painful sore wounds p a t i e n t l y I waited years slow r e c o v e r y just when the blisters recede gust of breeze rakes them a-fresh 13th dec 2012

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  1. Date: 12/25/2012 10:15:00 AM
    Yesha...this tanka does remind me of me revisiting my old mistakes and continually beating myself up...A congrats on this win! Appreciate your comments on my latest work. gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:02:00 PM
    A big Congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Well written poem. Congratulations on your win. Sending soup mail.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:14:00 PM
    Wonderful and nice piece,Yesha.....Congratulations on your well deserved win.....

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Yesha....a solid tanka story...wonderful work ! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Well done Yesha--congrats!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your win Yesha love well done xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:40:00 PM
    Yesha :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:58:00 PM
    way to go, Yesha. BIG congrats and what was Yasmin saying to you down here?

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:29:00 AM
    this is truly powerful, Yesha, this is aewsome.....

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:56:00 AM
    wow, I likes this!!! I am seeing lots of tankas all of a sudden. I need to check this out. i guess maybe it's a new contest??

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:44:00 PM
    Very expressive and emotive work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for stopping by..I will be busy for about a week or maybe 10 days with different things pertaining to Christmas..Sara

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:21:00 AM
    Ohh this is a very good tanka indeed Yesha.Love how you expressed the feelings with the help of metaphores.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:11:00 AM
    Ooh Yesha just love this image, it has happened to all of us I would think, good luck...David