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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:09:00 PM
    Haha, love the attitude in this. Good poem, you show that skank! -Patrick Farley IV

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 8/5/2013 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha. Thank you :)
  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:20:00 AM
    It isn't so often one sees street jargon used so well in a poem, but you succeeded very well in doing that, Skyler, in this quite fascinating poem. Your use of rhyming couplets in this fine poem was a great technique and very effective. Carl

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 2/16/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ~Sky~
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 3:50:00 AM
    Skyler back for a re-read of this stunning little gem...David

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:47:00 AM
    Skyler, your poem is full of deep emotions, very powerful, well done. Constance

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:30:00 PM
    SO WHAT have WE LEARNED THUS FAR?FIRSTLY WE DISCOVERED THAT YOU ARE AN ECLECTIC POET WHO PROBABLY STARTS a poem with ONE line & runs with it HINT-THERE ARE OTHER WORDS BESIDES STRIFE THAT RYME WITH LIFE I.E. WIFE-KNIIFE-FIFE-RHYFE-AND THERE IS but 1 ADJECTIVE IN THE ENTIRE ENGLISH LANGUAGE THAT SHOULD never be modified by an adverb-THe WORD is "UNIQUE- if u use "very" it is inherent in the word unique itself-i posted this cuz u don't get soupmail hope ya don'[t mind PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 5:56:00 PM
    Very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:36:00 PM
    YO GIRL! IN THIS POEM "YOU DIRTY LITTLE SKANK" GINSBURG WOULD APPROVE, AS DO I-WHAT IF-WHAT IF PEOPLE'S HEADS WERE ON BACKWARDS--JUST A GREAT EXISTENTIAL QUERY-LOYAL FRIEND INSOMNIA-FIRST STANZA IS KILLER AND FORCES THE READER TO READ ON-STORY OF A GUY I KNOW-BREATHING IN FUMES-GREAT FIRST LINE SAME REASON-THE CORRIDOR-FIRSTLY IT GIVES HONOR TO POE-desperately searching-but for what? GIRL-YOU GOT IT ON, NOW READ FEW OF ME BECAUSE YOU'RE IN SOME OF THE CREVICES PHREEPOETREE under JEFFRY COHAN

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:15:00 PM
    girl--he should not be getting a show, you should be in a one woman show reading the truth, i read about 10 poems and they all are worthy of commendation.....you tell it like it is, with colloqualisms and all...i dig that.and you wrote that you like my writing style.well just keep writing please. because i enjoy reading good writing by women who sound as if they get me...keep writing because i've got my eyes on you...thanks for the compliment PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~ be cool and no one's phool

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 12/13/2012 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! WOW. Majorly complemented right now. Grinning ear to ear. :)
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Skyler wow have you pinned this to her front door? very strong and very good . I like it but I am glad I am not her...David

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 12/13/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :P Thanks for reading
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:59:00 AM
    wonderful write, must say i have had a few of those dances myself, but not worth the bother in my view, plenty fish in the sea as they say, no man worth it :)

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 12/13/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your words Elizabeth :)
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Nice write. I think you are just telling it like it is, at least sometimes.

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 12/13/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading and commenting Clay
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:34:00 AM
    Can feel the anger! Good work

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 12/13/2012 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading Susan :)