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Lost Magic

Far away an alluring threshold
Lonely and forsaken
A gift of fantasy, behold

Crimson arches above, unshaken
Where mystical creatures abide
A world apart and forsaken

Fairy folk on moon tide
Sings song that mortals long to hear
A spiced land where enchantment abide

And there my magic hides in fear
During the mystical silent day
A spectacular sound I hear

Illusion, sorcery and strange sights so gray
Dance and sing by firefly light
As I long for magic on that crystal clear day

A pure trusting heart
To call a dragon a friend
Will this adventure last?

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  1. Date: 1/7/2013 7:20:00 AM

    Lovely write Tahera and nice to see you back again xx

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:04:00 AM

    nice one! good luck.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:39:00 PM

    wonderful write, Tahera. Happy New Year to you – sorry I’ve been away from Soup for so long (my wife recently left me for someone else). Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 1:27:00 PM

    Beautiful poem here Tahera.Happy New Year to you and yours.

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:41:00 AM

    don't know how long you're adventure will last,, Tahera, but your poetry will go on for ever, it is that good... have a wonderful festive season....

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 3:13:00 PM

    Wow, what a great job you've done for this challanging and difficult contest. Tahera!...great imagery and the questionku at the end wraps it up perfectly...reads like a sure winner - Tim

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 1:11:00 AM

    what an interesting questionku to accompany this one. The poem dealing with lost magic, is in itself, so magical. It kind of makes me think of the new Hobbit movie!! I hope to see that soon. I really enjoyed seeing this poem, Tahera.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:20:00 AM

    Outstanding Terzanelle, Tahera! How have you been, my friend? Best of luck in the contest, even though you do not need it. I enjoyed the imagery you've painted. Have a good weekend. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Only time will tell. I like your style.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:22:00 AM

    Superbly done entry Tahera. The poem has an excellent flow and intelligent questionku at the end. Great stuff and good luck with this write.