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Her Spouse's Cell Phone-Tanka Contest

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Her Spouse's Cell Phone-Tanka Contest


stored on his cell phone

a rolodex of young whores

all shapes and sizes

frozen, paralyzed, alone

she falls to her knees to pray



For Black-Eyed Susan’s Tanka Contest

12-12-12

fiction*

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:37:00 PM

    Congats Gwen sorry am late saying this...Seren

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Oh boy here i am late as usual, congrats on this wonderful winner, Gwen...just love this...

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:39:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great win.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:08:00 AM

    liked this powerful write , a different concept for tanka ....congratulations and happy Christmas love,Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Congratulations on first place finish.This is sad and powerful!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:16:00 PM

    Big Congrats on your win!!Loved it>

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:11:00 PM

    This is classic,Gwen....Beautiful write..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest....XOXO...

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Well deserved first Gwendolen!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:51:00 AM

    Hi Gwen love big congratulations my friend xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Hello Rix- :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on an awesome win! This one will resonate with any woman who has been burned. Really great write.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:57:00 PM

    gwen, I just knew Susan would love this one. well, guess what? I forgot to enter mine in her contest at all. I am such an idiot sometimes!!!! congrats for your splendid win and it was fun on the phone today.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:49:00 PM

    congrats on your first place win Gwen

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Troubling and effective Tanka, Gwendolyn...I can feel this lady's shock, pain and terrible realization...reads like a winner! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Gwen, yowser teriffic image...Merry Christmas...David

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 8:53:00 AM

    wow, this is a STRONG tanka, Gwen. How did I ever miss that you had made a recent post. Love it!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Looking for trouble you will certianly find it. Troubles me to think that I should lock my phone and I haven't one it yet.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:17:00 AM

    Oh! Sad but very powerful a write, Gwen. Susan is sure to like this one, its a great entry.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:25:00 PM

    Boy this one is a rough one [the topic]..how true though for too many! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 3:45:00 PM

    that's not gonna help,all hell is gonna break loose,lol,great write best of luck Gwen

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 2:26:00 PM

    I so enjoyed reading your tanka today luv. Wishing you a beautiful day. Hugs and luv always, Gail

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Really enjoyed reading your tanka. Glad it's only fiction.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Hi Gwendoline very imagainative tanka, I think cell phones are a pain myself cause a lot of trouble in exactly this way, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:55:00 PM

    sweety Gwendy,,congratulation for the contest!!!! this is awesome write..brilliant thought <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:37:00 PM

    That would be awful if it really happened to anyone, glad it is fiction, xxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Yes, this would be my action too I imagine...to pray! This is a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly stupendous poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:28:00 PM

    men will be men... but glad it is a fantasy and not real.