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Her Spouse's Cell Phone-Tanka Contest


stored on his cell phone

a rolodex of young whores

all shapes and sizes

frozen, paralyzed, alone

she falls to her knees to pray



For Black-Eyed Susan’s Tanka Contest

12-12-12

fiction*

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:37:00 PM

    Congats Gwen sorry am late saying this...Seren

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Oh boy here i am late as usual, congrats on this wonderful winner, Gwen...just love this...

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:39:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great win.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:08:00 AM

    liked this powerful write , a different concept for tanka ....congratulations and happy Christmas love,Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Congratulations on first place finish.This is sad and powerful!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 5:16:00 PM

    Big Congrats on your win!!Loved it>

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, this is amazing

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:11:00 PM

    This is classic,Gwen....Beautiful write..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest....XOXO...

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Well deserved first Gwendolen!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:51:00 AM

    Hi Gwen love big congratulations my friend xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Hello Rix- :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on an awesome win! This one will resonate with any woman who has been burned. Really great write.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:57:00 PM

    gwen, I just knew Susan would love this one. well, guess what? I forgot to enter mine in her contest at all. I am such an idiot sometimes!!!! congrats for your splendid win and it was fun on the phone today.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:49:00 PM

    congrats on your first place win Gwen

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Troubling and effective Tanka, Gwendolyn...I can feel this lady's shock, pain and terrible realization...reads like a winner! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Gwen, yowser teriffic image...Merry Christmas...David

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 8:53:00 AM

    wow, this is a STRONG tanka, Gwen. How did I ever miss that you had made a recent post. Love it!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Looking for trouble you will certianly find it. Troubles me to think that I should lock my phone and I haven't one it yet.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:17:00 AM

    Oh! Sad but very powerful a write, Gwen. Susan is sure to like this one, its a great entry.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:25:00 PM

    Boy this one is a rough one [the topic]..how true though for too many! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 3:45:00 PM

    that's not gonna help,all hell is gonna break loose,lol,great write best of luck Gwen

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 2:26:00 PM

    I so enjoyed reading your tanka today luv. Wishing you a beautiful day. Hugs and luv always, Gail

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Really enjoyed reading your tanka. Glad it's only fiction.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Hi Gwendoline very imagainative tanka, I think cell phones are a pain myself cause a lot of trouble in exactly this way, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 11:19:00 PM

    how did you know I fell on my knees to pray...lol,just joking..but this is good Gwendy...going to stock up on my cholocolate..need more as this looks like another winner to me..love to Sebs ..hope you have told him about me, his gran..

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:55:00 PM

    sweety Gwendy,,congratulation for the contest!!!! this is awesome write..brilliant thought <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:37:00 PM

    That would be awful if it really happened to anyone, glad it is fiction, xxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Yes, this would be my action too I imagine...to pray! This is a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly stupendous poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:28:00 PM

    men will be men... but glad it is a fantasy and not real.