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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:00:00 AM

    JOann, keep trying villanelles. You are doing very well especially if this is your first one. I hope to see more new poems of yours posted soon. Saw you "connecting" at the blogs and just wanted to come say hello to you and wish you a happy new year!

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Great write, this form is new to me. Loved the way u built it up. MerryChristmas. Regards , Mehnaz.

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:55:00 AM

    great write Joann,love it

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:31:00 AM

    ...... "Your first" villanelle and you've done it with brilliance, Joann. - Bravo, well done and I love it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:13:00 PM

    What a wonderful poem Joann , just love it xx

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:30:00 AM

    Dear Joann - "fragile essence" - I think describes most all of us. I don't know what a villanelle is, but I know what a connection is and you have made it brilliantly. If only we could turn our insides out to one another we might find great comraderie and obstructed love. love, kathy

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:21:00 PM

    You did tremendously awesome with this Villanelle, a very difficult form to write in! You have masterfully accomplished what few could do, a fantastic poem with this form on your first try! What a serious and intriguing piece you have written Joann! I really enjoyed reading this wondrously powerful poem this afternoon! Great Work!!

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey Date: 12/12/2012 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nice to see you back again Joann!