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The Victim In Disguise

There was a SERIOUS muddle
In the beautiful banking hall
Yes... caught up in that riddle?

A man in the queue had a fall!
An upshot of shoving and pushing
In the beautiful banking hall

The giggles were annoying
We all felt sorry for the victim
An upshot of shoving and pushing

We all said sorry to the victim
We were not sure he was sober
But certainly he was a rickety victim

Turned out he was a crazy robber!
A gun he pointed at the poor teller
I had to clobber a raucous robber!

He thudded like a tactless wheeler
There was a SERIOUS muddle
A gun he pointed at the poor teller 
Yes...caught up in that riddle?

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:56:00 PM

    Hi, Ndaba, thank you for sharing the poem. The imagery is not something I wish to be in the middle of. Bank robbing can always go wrong... especially for he or she stuck in the middle of the riddle... enjoyed your poem~ LINDA

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 3/25/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Linda!