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Fantasy Terzanelle Questionku

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Fantasy Terzanelle Questionku

It starts as a simple thought
that echoes in the brain 
waiting for idealism sought

Idealism starts the process train
that brings forth the  fantasy 
that echoes  in the brain

To fantasise is to be free
to imagine to feel totally
That brings forth the fantasy

to escape life's reality
no holding back the desire
to imagine to feel  totally

I fantasise about the burning fire
imagining it within me
no holding back the desire

No longer afraid, because you  see
it starts as a simple thought
imagining it within me
waiting for idealism sought

Lips touching lips
Hands pulling off clothes...
Ted's ear off, ring bearwatch
 



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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Seren, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Skat .......Seren
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:21:00 AM
    Smashing write Seren, and big congratulations on your winning spot once more my friend xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy...Seren
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Very nice!!! I love the build up and the aftermath. simple thought - powerful actions. Congrats on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vicky didnt find this an easy one.. Seren.
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:44:00 AM
    Congratulations, Seren, With short lines and the refrains syncing well eveywhere, and ending with a passionate questionku, it is simply a great write. !! Jag

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jag for your congrats ....Seren
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Seren.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you PD
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:58:00 PM
    Congrads on your win Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/11/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Congrats Seren on your special win xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/11/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Rose....Seren
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 7:13:00 PM
    Congratulations, I enjoyed your poems. Thanks for entry.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/11/2013 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard ......Seren
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:07:00 PM
    way to edit girl. soup xx

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Sweet, fantasy Seren. - Luck in contest. - Wishing you a peaceful and lovely Christmas! (welcome to visit my Christmas poem) Biiig hug / / Anne-Lise :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/13/2012 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise